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I have two good friends .One is similar to me , but the other friend is different.
A friend who is similar to me (is) named Chen .We are both crazy and greedy . We are both more outgoing than most kids . So ,we have some same habits. We like eating together.We like cartoons too . We always talk about cartoons in JAPAN.
My friend PING is quite different from me . Ping is quieter than me . She is more serious than me .She likes (没有the) Korean Stars. Such as MR.Dragon (and) EXO. But I do not .
I don’t really care if my friend are the same as me or different (, as long as) they are good.

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Don't Be Afraid to Say “No “
In modern times, people have been becoming 【busier and busier】 to cope with a great deal of matters and deals. Therefore we maybe have not more spare time to stretching out a helping hand.

So we must learn and wise to say "no” at proper times.

When we come across others asking for help sometimes, something we will say no, it is necessary and wise. If it comes, I think, First, you can't do it, can be directly or gently tell people you can't do that. You can take in someone a time, but can't take in someone a life time, after all, who also is not everything. There's 【master card】. You talk directly and even malarkey and clap breast not do it, said much more people will lose trust in you. 【You a pyrrhic victory. 动词不见了，我不懂你要说什么】

Second, because some people love 【hadn这是什么】 , feel like people I want, I can't do that, this is how didn't face. There is nothing the elder brothers.

Third, honestly tell people what you do not do what【;】 although others sometimes may not happy, but if on the other hand, you promised to somebody else do you can do it. So 【somebody】 else will still be very trust you, will think you are a deal, honest a trusted friend, can cooperation partners. Have the confidence of others, far more than you of those empty without faith commitment for a lot more.

Recently, I'm so busy that have no time to help others, but others asking me for help sometimes. In this situation , I learned and understood how to say "no ".

As a saying goes, everyone's time and energy limited, sometimes we need to learn to refuse.

Fat is My Happiness
Sometimes your joy is the source of your smile, but sometimes your smile can be the source of your joy. ——THICH NHAT HANH
It’s hard to believe that I was thin before I went to the fourth grade in primary school. I still remember the exact time others first told me the change of my body. It was the day the new term started, my big teacher who was in charge of the class greeted me with a smile, ‘You’ve got some fat, haven’t you? You have become chubby!’ Later he told me, ‘Actually you have just been much stouter, you’re more like a manly boy now!’
One year later he gave me a much bigger smile, ‘You’re my student, you learn everything from me!’ Then I realized I had gained so much weight.
In the following year I luckily passed an important test which decided whether one could be accepted by the school where I am studying now. The test is wholly an aptitude test. It had two parts, sports and a language test. I was nearly used up to complete the 400-meter race. I felt so nervous, especially when the men who was in charge of the starting gun reminded us that we should be careful and not be tripped down. After ten seconds he shouted, ‘Run!’ Then I rushed out. After running for only 7 or 8 meters I fell over. Nothing could be more terrible, I had a terrible start ，my confidence was terribly shaken. I was far behind others. Of course I went on, I speed on and ran like a madman. I was determined to run as far as I could. Once I even caught others up and overtook them, but soon I was out of energy. Finally I hard dragged my overweight body to the finish line. I was the last one that finished the race. The timer smiled to me, ‘One minute and 41 seconds.’ I passed. No matter whether he was lying or not, I deserved to pass it, wasn’t it?
However I never hate the fat that bulges my body. I’m so pleased that people around me are so kind though they describe me mostly by using ‘Chubby’, ‘Large’, ‘Plump’, and ‘Stout’. They often tell me, ‘Hey, you’ve become thinner!’ appearing to be very sincere. I never lose my temper when others call me ‘fatso’. I always think, ‘That’s me. The reason why most people think being fat is unfortunate is that they only know those scientific sayings like ‘being fat can cause high blood or hypertensive’. But I think’ ‘Just let it be, I am a Big Mac on basketball ground and I am powerful!’ It’s such a fantastic thing to enjoy the fun that my overweight body brings me!
我改了半天了
呵呵
好长啊
尽力了～～～

恩 有我一半水平了
PS:刷分

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