求英语高手帮忙翻译个文章啦，领导要的！
Hi,Boss:
would please you tell me,How do I want to do am better ？thanks a lot!
best regards!
Shakriaaa
Student Management System [summary] in a university with 10,000 students, the students manage to become a more delicate matter. Fortunately there is a computer, with a variety of procedures to help you facilitate the completion of this work. I produced a student management system to facilitate the management of students. Could be included in the process, enquiries, classification and exit 4 operation. When choosing "recorded" by the time of presentation in accordance with the system of science / names / English results / accomplishments language / mathematics performance, and then the system places on the success of student performance information. When the performance of students in need enquiries into the system choice "enquiries", and then choose the "enquiries form" after learning of imported, the system will show the student information enquiries. When the system includes a number of students following information may also be on their classification. Access to the system in the selection of "classification", the system will automatically back on the classification results in display screens. But I do have some problems with the system remain. At the beginning of the preparation time I joined the school system as a function of the average hours, but in the final words of the inquiry, after a functional classification of the average hours do not know how to function can not be achieved, probably in the final transfer function in a number of problems. I do still exist in the system a problem is the lack of a delete function. I have been in the last period of time, taking into account how to add a delete function, after some students and I found to my discussion of this system needs to be done to add a delete function great changes, because the last time relations delete function had not yet been achieved. Do such a curriculum design, on the one hand, I examined my one semester to learn the results, on the other hand, let me further understand and use it, but also let me have their own inadequacies and weaknesses, let me be in the future for learning and strengthening.
获知您对西安之行非常满意，我深感荣幸。Acknowledge your trip to xian very satisfied, I am deeply honored.
十分高兴有机会接待各位，让我一尽地主之谊，答谢你们在我和我同事去年访问欧洲期间的申请款待。
Very glad to have the opportunity to receive you, let me a friendship of the completely landlord, thank you in me and my colleague during the last visit Europe for hospitality.
我公司成立五年来，屡获外国友人来函赞誉我们的隧道工程，同样，我也为贵公司机械的强大功能所震撼，并且有幸领略了北欧最美丽的冬天。
My company is set up for five years, and has won praise our letter of foreign friends of tunnel engineering, similarly, I also for your company be shocked by the strong function of machinery, and to appreciate the Nordic most beautiful winter.
他日如有任何需要，亦请与我们联络，我期待着我们将有更好的交流。
If there is any need better, and to please to contact with us, I'm looking forward to our will have better communication.
在此对您的来信表示再次感谢。
In this to your letter says thanks again.
Acknowledge your trip to xian very satisfied, I am deeply honored. Very glad to have the opportunity to receive you, let me a friendship of the completely landlord, thank you in me and my colleague during the last visit Europe for hospitality.
My company is set up for five years, and has won praise our letter of foreign friends of tunnel engineering, similarly, I also for your company be shocked by the strong function of machinery, and to appreciate the Nordic most beautiful winter.
If there is any need better, and to please to contact with us, I'm looking forward to our will have better communication. In this to your letter says thanks again.
你好！很高兴为您解答
Acknowledge your trip to xian very satisfied, I am deeply honored. Very glad to have the opportunity to receive you, let me a friendship of the completely landlord, thank you in me and my colleague during the last visit Europe for hospitality.
My company is set up for five years, and has won praise our letter of foreign friends of tunnel engineering, similarly, I also for your company be shocked by the strong function of machinery, and to appreciate the Nordic most beautiful winter.
If there is any need better, and to please to contact with us, I'm looking forward to our will have better communication. In this to your letter says thanks again.
英语译文：
Acknowledge your trip to xian very satisfied, I am deeply honored. Very glad to have the opportunity to receive you, let me a friendship of the completely landlord, thank you in me and my colleague during the last visit Europe for hospitality.
My company is set up for five years, and has won praise our letter of foreign friends of tunnel engineering, similarly, I also for your company be shocked by the strong function of machinery, and to appreciate the Nordic most beautiful winter.
If there is any need better, and to please to contact with us, I'm looking forward to our will have better communication. In this to your letter says thanks again.
Getting to know that you are very satisfied with the trip to Xi An, I am deeply honored. I am very glad to have the opportunity to receive all of you, so let me be the host to thank you for hospitality during the period I and my colleague visited Europe last year.
My company is set up for five years, and has won praises from foreign friends by letters for our tunnel engineering, similarly, I also be shocked by the strong function of machinery of your company , and I luckly get to appreciate the most beautiful winter in Nordic.
If there is any need some day, please to contact with us, I'm looking forward to our better communication. Hereby I want to thank you again for your letter.
It is my great honor to acknowledge your satisfaction to your Xi`an trip. I felt so glad to have that opportunity to receipt all of you, being the host, and show our deep appreciation to your hospitality during our last year stay in Europe!
Since the establishment of our company five years ago, our tunnel projects have been highly praised by a lot overseas emails from foreign customers and friends. In the mean time, we admired so much and were impressed by the stupendous performance of your company machines, and felt grateful to have the chance to see the most beautiful winter of North Europe.
If there is anything needs us to do for you, please feel free to contact us. We are looking forward to more and better communication between us. Once more, please allow me to express our thanks to your kind email.
呵呵，由于是商务函件，所以一开头用的句型尽量为第三人称的，不然显得太自我，不够正式。句式也尽量用长句，从句。中文都是一个个的短句，可英文不一样，正式的文件宜用长句。
上面的话纯属个人观点。
求英语高手帮忙翻译个文章啦，领导要的！视频
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