书面表达（满分25分）实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表、更要学会倾听。请你根据下表
Good afternoon, everyone. The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”. Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship. Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed. What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other. Thank you for your listening! 演讲稿要注意感情真挚、热情洋溢，可以大量运用排比句型，准确流畅地表达出题目中所提供的信息，这样会进一步地增强了这篇演说稿的说服力。
下面是几篇高考真题：
【试题回放】假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs.Wilson不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs.Wilson写一留言条，内容包括：
1．外出购物
2．替房东还书K
3．Tracy来电话留言：1）咖啡屋（BoltonCoffee）见面取消
2）此事已告知Susan
3)尽快回电
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Mrs.Wilson,I’mgoingoutshopping,andwon’tbebackuntilabout5:00pm.IhavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturntotheCityLibrary.Atabout1o’clockthisafternoon,Tracycalled,sayingthatshecouldn’tmeetyouatBoltonCoffeetomorrowmorningasshehassomethingimportanttoattendto.Shefeltverysorryaboutthat,butsaidthatyoucouldsetsomeothertimeforthemeeting.Shewantedyoutocallherbackassoonasyouarehome.ShehasalreadytoldSusanaboutthischange.Yours,
LiHua
[名师点评]
本文属于提纲式要点作文，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活型的原则。行文人称、时态运用恰当、准确，各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。【试题回放】鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。但是，过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。请你以鼠标为切入点，根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇短文。
鼠标的必要性对多数人来说，操作计算机，上网冲浪……
鼠标的便捷性
点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删除……编辑文本，搜索信息……收发邮件，选购商品……
点播音乐，下载电影……如果过分依赖鼠标……（请考生结合自身感受，列举两到三点）
注意：
1．对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2．词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计人总词数。
3．作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
Themouseisamosteffectivedeviceusedbypeopletocommunicatewithacomputer．
Formostpeople,it’salmostimpossibletooperateacomputerwithoutamouse,letalonesurftheInternet.Awell-chosenmouseisreallyhandy,flexibleandconvenientincontrollingthescreen.Withthefunctionsofinserting,deleting,movingandcopying,itenablesustoedittest,browsewebpageanddownloadwhatwewant.Itcanevenbringusafloodofmusic,moviesandPCgames.Justimagine,allthiscanbedonewithacutemouse.
Aconvenienttoolcancertainlymakeourworkeasier,butitdoesn’talwayshelpinapositiveway.Toomuchreadyinformationonourfingertipsleaveslittleroomforknowledgepursuing.Toomanyreadyanswersmakeuslessexcitedinfindingtruth.Relyingtoomuchonmouseclickingmakesuslazierandlesscreativebothmentallyandphysically.
【名师点评】本文为提纲式说明文体裁，所选内容与我们生活相关，考生只要把所给要点逐条陈述，适度发挥，不要逐条翻译即可。文章说理清楚，语言流畅，句式表达多样，用词恰当、准确。不失为一篇满分作文。【试题回放】实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为“BeingaGoodListener”的英文演讲稿。
为何倾听表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关系
谁来倾听家长倾听孩子理解孩子，消除代沟，……
老师倾听学生了解学生，满足需求，……
同学相互倾听增进友谊，互帮互学，……
怎样倾听（请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。）
注意：
1、对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2、词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3、演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。
Goodafternoon,everyone.
Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“BeingaGoodListener”.
Goodlisteningcanalwaysshowrespect,promoteunderstanding,andimproveinterpersonalrelationship.
Manypeoplesuggestthatparentsshouldlistenmoretotheirchildren,sotheywillunderstandthembetter,andfinditeasytonarrowthegenerationgap;teachersshouldlistenmoretotheirstudents,thentheycanmeettheirneedsbetter,andplacethemselvesinagoodrelationshipwiththeirstudents;studentsshouldlistenmoretotheirclassmates,thustheywillhelpandlearnfromeachother,andafriendshipislikelytobeformed.
WhatIwanttostressisthateachofusshouldlistentoothers.Showyourrespectandneverstopotherstilltheyfinishtheirtalk;showyouareinterestedbyasupportivesilenceoraknowingsmile;beopen-mindedtodifferentopinionseventhoughyoudon’tlikethem.Inaword,goodlisteningcanreallyenableustogetclosertoeachother.
Thankyouforyourlistening!
【名师点评】
这是一篇感情真挚、热情洋溢的演讲稿，文中大量运用排比句型，不但准确流畅地表达出题目中所提供的信息，而且体现出作者熟练运用英语的能力以及不俗的文采。第三段中所使用的相同结构的复合句式，将倾听的对象及其作用阐述得淋漓尽致；而第四段中用一系列的祈使句议论应如何倾听，则更进一步地增强了这篇演说稿的说服力。【试题回放】假设你是卜曼宜，你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。
要点：1.问题：手机不响铃，不能发短信；该产品已售完，无法更换；型号新，无配件，无法维修。2.要求：公司应尽快予以更换。
注意：1.词数为100左右；
2.参考词汇：配件——sparepart;
3.电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入你所写词数）；
4.已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡。
DearSir，
IamwritingtoyouforthemobilephoneofDephone-S250Iboughton20thApr.2008atTeleMallinWuhan,P.R.China.Tendaysafterthat,itdidn’tringandsendshortmessages.ThenItookittotheseller,butwastoldthatthemodelhadbeensoldoutandIhadtowaitatleastthreemonthsforanewone.Ihadnochoicebuttogototherepairman.Tomydisappointment,hesaidsinceitwasanewmodelinChina,itwasimpossibletofixitwithouttherightspareparts.IwassodesperateonhearingthatforIcannotwaitthatlong.Therefore,Ihavetorequirethatyousendmeanewoneofthesamemodelwithinamonth.
Thankyouforyourconsideration.
Sincerelyyours,
BuManyi
【名师点评】
本文内容要点齐全，语言丰富，结构合理，如头两句说明了购买手机后发现故障的情况，中间部分说明了无法维修而必须让公司更换手机的原委，最后明确提出自己的要求，明白流畅，将题目所提出的要点全部表达清楚，较好的完成了任务。全文以一般过去时为基调，结合主动语态与被动语态，并使用了so,but,therefore等连接词，使文章结构完整严密。固定短语，如besoldout,atleast,hadnochoicebuttogo,tomydisappointment,onhearingthat等的使用，使文章的语言显得地道而精炼。【试题回放】2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100万学生积极参与了这项活动。
教育部倡导学生：
u每天锻炼一小时
u健康工作五十年
u幸福生活一辈子
请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。
注意：
1、发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。
2、词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3、参考词汇：阳光体育活动——anationalstudentsportsprogram;
教育部——theMinistryofEducation
Goodafternoon,everyone,
Thenationalstudentsportsprogram,wagedbytheMinistryofEducationandaimedatimprovingstudentshealth,washeldfrom10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.onApril29，2007inmanyprimaryandmiddleschoolsalloverChina.Almost11millionstudentsinJiangsuprovinceparticipatedinthisprogram.
TheMinistryofEducationadvocatesthatwedoexercisesforonehouradayandcanworkhealthilyfor50years.Ourwholelifewillbeveryenjoyable.
Inmyopinion,weseniorhighschoolstudentsshoulddoexercisesforonehouradayeventhoughoursparetimeislimited.Healthisabasicconditionforourstudy.Ifwedidnotdoexercises,wewouldn’tbeabletogetgoodstudyrecords.Soeveryoneofyou,jointheprogramnow!
Thankyou!
【名师点评】
本文的结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。本文分为三段，前两段叙述，后一段发表观点，典型的作文结构。在句式使用上，作者用法多样，使用了独立结构和虚拟语气，十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。
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