写一篇英语作文要用过去式题目A trip the zoo 上个星期六，我和Lily一起去了动物园
Last Saturday, I went to the zoo with my friend Liming. The animals are very funny and the children love them, too. But we found someone throwing foods to the animals. I stopped him and said: “Animals are our friends. Do not throw foods to animals.” At last, we saw a lot of animals there. We were very happy.
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last week I went to the Xiangjiang Zoo in Panyu.with my family.The zoo was very big and very beautiful ,the zoo has a lot of animals ,panda,lion,tiger,snake,elephant,fox Collected By Panda ws very cute and very fat.
but it was not my favourite animal.Lion ws very strong ,but it wasn’t my favourite animal either,because it wasn’t very handsome.Tiger ws very strong and very handsome ,it’s my favourite animal,because it’s very strong and very handsome.I feel very happy !
上周我去了番禺的湘江动物园。与我的家人。动物园非常大，非常漂亮，动物园里有很多动物，熊猫，狮子，老虎，蛇，大象，狐狸，熊猫很可爱，很胖，但它不是我最喜欢的动物。
狮子非常强壮，但它也不是我最喜欢的动物，因为它不是很英俊。老虎非常强壮，非常英俊，它是我最喜欢的动物，因为它非常强壮，非常英俊。我感到很高兴!
last Sat. I went to the zoo with Lily, we saw a lot of diffence animals, like: lions, targers, pandas, and elephants..etc. I liked Panda very much, they were so cute, and they love to ate banboo. we took many pictures in the zoo and we had a great time in there.
写一篇英语作文要用过去式题目A trip the zoo 上个星期六，我和Lily一起去了动物园视频
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