仿写五年级上册课文《梅花魂》
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“梅花愈是寒冷，愈是风欺雪压，花开的愈精神，愈秀气。她是最有品格、最有灵魂、最有骨气的”。她是中华民族精神的象征。《梅花魂》这篇课文以梅花为线索，讲了有关外祖父的五件事，表现了这位老人对梅花的挚爱，表达了身在异国的华侨眷恋祖国的思想感情
《梅花魂》分段及段意
全文共有十六个自然段，可分为三段：
第一部分（第1自然段）：每当“我”看到梅花，就会想起葬身异国他乡的外祖父。
第二部分（第2至15自然段）：回忆了外祖父的五件事情。
第三部分（第16自然段）：“我”时常感受到外祖父眷恋祖国的心。
天刚破晓，我便风一样蹑手蹑脚走向你，生平第一次认识了你。
雪中的你嫣然似一位落入凡间的精灵，一尘不染，高雅风流。杏黄的花蕊吐露醉人的芬芳。如一满腹心事的女子，着一袭白衣，伫立在风雪中，不言不语，只有一双深情的眼神，令人怜惜，令人叹为观止。更兼着雪影娟娟，魂魄自是带些寒意，沉思凝眸，冰肌若玉。
我静静地立在雪地里，不肯触摸她，唯恐惊动你深藏腹中的点点花魂！遗我终生缺憾。我风一样吻遍你的香魂，你仍旧不语，你在怪我吗？不，你和我一样都在默默倾听这无声的美丽，疏影横斜，暗香浮动，多么美丽的花魂啊！可是无论梅花还是花魂，总难留住，犹如昙花一现，美只在一瞬间，却给人留下了永恒的美丽。不同的是昙花美只在一瞬间，而梅花却美了一个季节，但再美的东西，终究是要离去的，你所期望的也永远是缺憾重重的美丽。
梅花，多么富有诗意的名字，你看到的只是她的美，可你却不知道她有美丽的花魂！我记得曹公的诗句“花魂默默无情绪，鸟梦痴痴何处惊！”似乎将美丽的花的魂魄表述的淋漓尽致！可是花自是无语，尽管花开也会花落，但无论如何，它曾经美丽过，花瓣似雨，飘落纷纷扬扬。而此刻，你完全不必为它悲伤，君不知，“落红不是无情物，化作春泥更护花”的美喻吗？
花虽然落了，但它却又在孕育又一片浩瀚的雪海，而花魂永远是一份你看不到的美丽，虽然缺憾重重，但美丽却是永恒的
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