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高考英语作文乱写凑字数最多能得0-5分。高考英语作文,不管是全国卷,还是地方卷,都有明确的给分标准。给分标准基本是一致的。一、一般一篇25分,字数要求150词的英语作文评分原则如下:1.本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。2.评分时,可先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后给分。3.概要部分少于20词或多于40词;全文少于130词或多于180词的,从总分中酌情减去1-2分。4.评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、运用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。5.拼写和标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6.如字迹难以辨认,以致影响表达,将分数降低一个档次。二、各档次的给分范围和要求第五档:(21—25分)完全完成了试题规定的任务。l覆盖所有内容要点。l语法结构和词汇有个别小错误,但为尽量使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。l有效地使用了衔接手段,全文结构紧凑,内容连贯。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档:(16—20分)完成了试题规定的任务。l虽漏掉一、二个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。l应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。l语法结构和词汇方面应用基本准确,少许错误主要是因为尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。l应用简单的语句间的衔接手段,全文结构紧凑,内容较连贯。达到了预期的写作目的。第三档:(11—15分)基本完成了试题规定的任务。l虽漏掉一些内容,但基本覆盖主要内容。l应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。l有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。l应用简单的衔接手段,内容基本连贯。整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档(6—10分)未恰当完成试题规定的任务。l漏掉或未清楚描述某些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。l语法结构单一,所用词汇有限。l有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对所写内容的理解。l较少使用衔接手段,内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档(1—5分)未完成试题规定的任务。l明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容。l语法结构单一,所用词汇不当。l有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响内容理解。l缺乏语句间的衔接手段,内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。0分:未能传达给读者任何信息:内容太少,无法评判;所写内容均与试题要求内容无关或无法看清。

Why are bicycles so popular in China
Bicycle is one of the most important transportation of Chinese people. Because Chinese live not far away from school and work place it means people can get to there by bicycle.And taking bicycle is a good way to exercise,they can help people building a good body.
Riding bicycles is convient means of transportation. In free time ,you can ride a bicycle to make a short trip. For example, You can visit countryside,and go anywhere you want to go .
In 21th centry, many countries are in shortage of energy. Riding bicycles is a good way for us to save energy . As we know, our earth is not safe. The air has been polluted seriously. We ride bicycle instead drive car.
That is why bicycle is so popular in China .

我高考的时候也想把英语作文搞搞~真的是很头痛呢^^
进了大学读了英语系才发现,如果我高中的时候就去看多大学的东西,就不会在高中那些少的可怜的英语作文材料里纠结了~而且高考英语都是大学老师在批~他们看到你用这种大学英语的东西会很加分哒^^~所以给你提供我觉得相当有用的东西哦

英语四六级写作25个加分句型
一、~~~ the + ~ est + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc)
~~~ the most + 形容词 + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc)
例句:Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.
海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。
Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.
张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。

二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V
例句:Nothing is more important than to receive education.
没有比接受教育更重要的事。

三、~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.(再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。)
例句:We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.
我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。

四、There is no denying that + S + V ...(不可否认的...)
例句:There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.
不可否认的,我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。

五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~ (全世界都知道...)
例句:It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.
全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。

六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~ (毫无疑问的...)
例句:There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.
毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。

七、An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子 (...的优点是...)
例句:An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won’t create (produce) any pollution.
使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。

八、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子 (...的原因是...)
例句:The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air./ The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.
我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。

九、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子 (如此...以致于...)
例句:So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.
时间是如此珍贵,我们经不起浪费它。

十、Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be, S + V~~~ (虽然...)
例句:Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. {by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不}
虽然我们的国家富有,我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。

十一、The + ~er + S + V,
~~~the + ~er + S + V ~~~
The + more + Adj + S + V,
~~~the + more + Adj + S + V~~~(愈...愈...)
例句:The harder you work, the more progress you make.
你愈努力,你愈进步。
The more books we read, the more learned we become.
我们书读愈多,我们愈有学问。

十二、By +Ving, ~~ can ~~ (借着...,..能够..)
例句:By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.
借着做运动,我们能够始终保持健康。

十三、~~~ enable + Object(受词)+ to + V (..使..能够..)
例句:Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.
听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。

十四、On no account can we + V ~~~ (我们绝对不能...)
例句:On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.
我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。

十五、It is time + S + 过去式 (该是...的时候了)
例句:It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.
该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。

十六、Those who ~~~ (...的人...)
例句:Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.
违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。

十七、There is no one but ~~~ (没有人不...)
例句:There is no one but longs to go to college.
没有人不渴望上大学。

十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V (不得不...)
例句:Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.
既然考试迫在眉睫,我不得不放弃做运动。

十九、It is conceivable that + 句子 (可想而知的)
It is obvious that + 句子 (明显的)
It is apparent that + 句子 (显然的)
例句:It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.
可想而知,知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。

二十、That is the reason why ~~~ (那就是...的原因)
例句:Summer is sultry. That is the reason why I don’t like it.
夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。

二十一、For the past + 时间,S + 现在完成式...(过去...年来,...一直...)
例句:For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination.
过去两年来,我一直忙着准备考试。

二十二、Since + S + 过去式,S + 现在完成式。
例句:Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.
自从他上高中,他一直很用功。

二十三、It pays to + V ~~~ (...是值得的。)
例句:It pays to help others.
帮助别人是值得的。

二十四、be based on (以...为基础)
例句:The progress of thee society is based on harmony.
社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。

二十五、Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力的)
例句:We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.
我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。

还有下面这些是我正在读的一些原版书里的好句子
You can never have too much sky. You can fall asleep and wake up drunk on sky, and sky can keep you safe when you are sad. Here there is too much sadness and not enough sky. Butterflies too are few and so are flowers and most things that are beautiful. Still, we take what we can get and make the best of 。你永远不能拥有太多的天空。你可以在天空下睡去,醒来又沉醉。在你忧伤的时候,天空会给你安慰。可是忧伤太多,天空不够,蝴蝶不够,花儿也不够。大多美好的东西都不够。于是,我们去我们所能,好好的享用。——《芒果街上的小屋》

IT is a truth universally acknowledged, that (a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.)这是一条举世皆知的真理,那就是...(套进去^^)——《傲慢与偏见》

There is no royal road to (science.) ......路上无坦途。——马克思。

有的时候一个很好的单词作用也是非常强大的哦~可以替换以下哈~这些都是传说中的big words~

1. important =crucial (extremely important),significant(amount or effect large enough to be important)
2.common=universal, ubiquitous(if something is ubiquitous, it seems to be everywhere)
3.abundant=ample(enough and usually extra), plentiful(enough for people's needs and wants)1

4.stick=adhere, cling(hold on something tightly)1

5.neglect=ignore.(difference: neglect means someone has not paid enough attention to something; ignore means no attention.)

6.near=adjacent(twothings next to each other), adjoin(the same as adjacent)'

7.pursue=woo(man woos woman, old-fashioned), seek(if you seek sth, you try to obtain it. FORMAL)

8.accurate=precise(precise is exact and accurate in all details), exact(correct in every detail)

9.vague=obscure(unknown or known by only a few people)

10.top=peak, summit

11.competitor=rival, opponent(especially in sports and politics)1

12.blame=condemn(if you condemn something, you say it is very bad and unacceptable)

13.opinon=perspective, standpoint(means looking at an event or situation in a particular way)

14.fame=prestige(describe those who are admired), reputation

15.build=erect(you can erect something as buildings, FORMAL), establish

16.insult=humiliate(do something or say something which makes
people feel ashamed or stupid)

17.complain=grumble (complain something in a bad-tempered way)

18.primary=radical (very important and great in degree), fundamental

19.relieve=alleviate (alleviate means you make pain or sufferings less intense or severe)

20.force=coerces into(coerce means you make someone do something s/he does not want to),compel

21.enlarge=magnify(magnify means make something larger than it really is)

22.complex=intricate(if something is intricate, it often has many small parts and details)

23. Lonely=solitary (if someone is solitary, there is no one near him/her

24.small=minuscule(very small), minute, V. A. B8 Q6 w, p$ S

25.praise=extol(stronger than praise), compliment(polite and political)

26.hard-working=assiduous(someone who is assiduous works hard or does things very thoroughly

27.difficult=arduous (if something is arduous, it is difficult and tiring, and involves a lot of efforts)

28.poor(soil)=barren, infertile(used to describe the soil is so poor that plants cannot be planted on it)

29.fragile=brittle, vulnerable(someone who is vulnerable is easily hurt emotionally or physically)+
30.show=demonstrate (to demonstrate a fact means tp make it clear to people.)

31.big=massive(large in size, quantity, or extent), colossal(use this word, you emphasize something’s large), tremendous(INFORMAL)+

32.avoid=shun(if someone shuns something, s/he deliberately avoid that something or keep away from it.)% [- ?0 B/ X: V

33.fair=impartial(someone who is impartial is able to give a fair opinion or decision on something.)0 U! V0 e/ a" h0 L8 ~

34.attack=assault (physically attack someone), assail (attack violently

35.dislike=abhor(abhor means you hate something to a extreme extent for moral reasons), loathe(dislike very much)!

36.ruin=devastate (it means damage something very badly, or utterly destroy it.)

39.always=invariably(the same as always, but better than always)4

40.forever=perpetual(a perpetual state never changes), immutable(something immutable will never change or be changed)

41.surprise=startle(it means surprise you slightly), astound(surprise you to a large degree),astonish(the same as astound)

42.enthusiasm=zeal (a great enthusiasm), fervency (sincere and enthusiasm)#

43.quiet=tranquil(calm and peaceful), serene(calm and quiet)!

44.expensive=exorbitant(it means too expensive that it should be)

45.luxurious=lavish(impressive and very expensive), sumptuous(grand and very expensive

46.boring=tedious(if you describe something tedious, you mean it is boring and frustrating)

47.respect=esteem(if you esteem someone, you respect and admire him/her. FORMAL)

48.worry=fret(if you fret about something, you worry about it)

49.cold=chilly(unpleasantly cold), icy(extremely cold)

50.hot=boiling(very hot)

51.dangerous=perilous(very dangerous, hazardous(dangerous, especially to people's safety and health)/ {

52.nowadays=currently

53.only=unique(the only one of its kind), distinctive;

54.stop=cease(if something ceases, it stops happening or existing)

55.part=component(the components of something are the parts that it is made of)( h

56.result=consequence(the results or effects of something)

57.obvious=apparent, manifest

58.basedon=derived fromcan see or notice them very easily)

60.quite=fairly

61.pathetic=lamentable(very uncomfortable and disappointing)

62.field=domain(a particular field of thought, activities or interest)

63.appear=emerge(come into existence)

64.whole=entire(the whole of something)8

65.wet=moist(slightly wet), damp(slightly wet), humid(very damp and hot)!

66.wrong=erroneous(incorrect or partly correct)

67.difficult=formidable

68.change=convert(change into another form)

69.typical=quintessential(this word means represent a typical example of something)

70.careful=cautious(very careful in order to avoid danger), prudent(careful and
sensible)

71.ability=capacity, capability(the same as ability)

72.strange=eccentric(if some one is eccentric, s/he behaves in a strange way, or
his/her opinion is different from most people)

73.rich=affluent(if you are affluent, you have a lot of money)

74.use= utilize (the same as use)

75.dubious=skeptical(if you are skeptical about something, you have doubts on it.)

76.satisfy=gratify (if you are gratified by something, it gives you pleasure and
satisfaction)

77.short=fleeting, ephemeral(if something is ephemeral, it lasts a short time)

78.scholarship=fellowship

79.angry=enraged(extremely angry)

80.smelly=malodorous(used to describe an unpleasant smell)

81.ugly=hideous(if something is hideous, it is very ugly or unattractive)#

82.attractive=appealing(pleasing and attractive), absorbing(something absorbing can
attract you a great deal)
83.diverse=miscellaneous(a miscellaneous groups consists of many different kinds of

things)

84.disorder=disarray, chaos

85.crazily=frantically(used to describe someone who behaves in a wild and

uncontrolled way)

86.rapid=meteoric(ATTENTION: meteoric is only used to describe someone achieves

success quickly)

87.ordinary=mundane(very ordinary and not at interesting or unusual)

88.despite=notwithstanding(FORMAL)

89.best=optimal(used to describe the best level something can achieve)/

90.sharp=acute(severe and intense)

91.unbelievable=inconceivable(ifyou deem something inconceivable, you think it very

unlike to happen ^

92.puzzle=perplex(something perplex someone means it confuses and worries him/her

because he/she does not understand it)

93.method=avenue(away of getting something done)

94.famous=distinguished(used to describe people who are successful in their career)

95.ancient=archaic(extremely old and extremely old-fashioned)

96.decorate=embellish(embellish means make something look more attractive via

decorating it with something else)/

97.possible=feasible(if something is feasible, it can be done, made or achieved)

98.so=consequently, accordingly

99.rare=infrequent (doesn’t happen often

100.greedy=rapacious(greedy and selfish)

以下是其他的搜集

英语写作常用句型(一)段首句

1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……

There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some
people suggest that ____.

2. 俗话说(常言道)……,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使在今天,
它在许多场合仍然适用。

There is an old saying______. Its the experience of our
forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even
today.

3. 现在,……,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先,……;
其次,……。更为糟糕的是……。

Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily
life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is
that______.

4. 现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外(而且)
……。

Nowadays,it is common to ______. Many people like ______
because ______. Besides,______.

5. 任何事物都是有两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不
利的一面。

Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception,it
has both advantages and disadvantages.

6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)……,在他们看
来,……

People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person.
Some people say that ______.To them,_____.

7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……,这个问题变得越来越严重。

Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming
more and more serious.

8. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题,特别是在年青人当中,将引发激烈
的辩论。

______ has become a hot topic among people,especially
among the young and heated debates are right on their way.

9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用,它给我们带来了许
多好处,但同时也引发一些严重的问题。

______ has been playing an increasingly important role in
our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of
benefits but has created some serious problems as well.

10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可
以看出……。很显然……,但是为什么呢?

According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in
the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that______
while. Obviously,______,but why?

(二)中间段落句

1. 相反,有一些人赞成……,他们相信……,而且,他们认为……。

On the contrary,there are some people in favor of ___.At
the same time,they say____.

2. 但是,我认为这不是解决……的好方法,比如……。最糟糕的
是……。

But I dont think it is a very good way to solve ____.For
example,____.Worst of all,___.

3. ……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的,(也是)非常重要的。
首先,……。而且……,最重要的是……

______is necessary and important to our countrys
development and construction. First,______.Whats
more, _____.Most important of all,______.

4. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先,我们可以……。

There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we
can______

5. 面临……,我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方
面……,另一方面,

Confronted with______,we should take a series of effective
measures to______. For one thing,______For another,______

6. 早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……,另外……。所有这些方法肯定
会……。

It is high time that something was done about it. For
example. _____.In addition. _____.All these measures
will certainly______.

7. 为什么……?第一个原因是……;第二个原因是……;第三个原因
是……。总的来说,……的主要原因是由于……

Why______? The first reason is that ______.The second
reason is ______.The third is ______.For all this, the
main cause of ______due to ______.

8. 然而,正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样,……也有它的不利的一
面,象……。

However, just like everything has both its good and bad
sides, ______also has its own disadvantages, such as
______.

9. 尽管如此,我相信……更有利。

Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous.


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