关于极限运动的英语作文，打分，改错。满分30，高中水平。希望批改的仔细些，整体构思怎么样？
字比较不清楚，打分应会降低
字数不够
有一些小亮点但还是不多
按江苏高考的话不会超过10分
PS：要好好练练字
hehe,let me have a try ~
music is penetrating deely everywhere in our daily life,no one can avoid being influenced by music.music is so important that life without music is like a severe winter without sunshine.
music is our good lifetime companion.it helps you ease stress from busy work and study,turn dull moments into delightful ones,relieve the tension from a blue day,cheer you up when you are sad.
music is very relaxing.after a day's tiring work,you may as well listen to some light music which is likely to bring you refreshment.music is also powerful.when you suffer a blue day,why not turn on your record and play some encouraging music,which may help to pull you out of the depression and regain your vigor.music is miracle.it may subtly increase your appetite and do good to your digestion.
you will probably enjoy music throughout your life .it makes your life full of happiness and frees you from anything unhappy!
People who take risks are found both in dangerous sports and business. But it is a special person who takes a risk with his own life as opposed to his money. My father was a risk taker. He put everything be owned into his business, but he stopped playing risky sports like horseback riding and skiing. Once his business was a success and he no longer bad to worry about providing for us, he returned on the age of 60, to the risky sports that he did as a youth.
Someone who plays a dangerous sport must be an optimist. They cannot imagine that anything will happen to them. They never think about breaking their leg while skiing, falling off a cliff while rock climbing, falling on their head while sky diving. They live for the thrill of the moment without a thought to the many things that could go wrong.
Rock climbers and sports car drivers must be fatalist. They might plan for potential problems, but once they have done everything they can do, the outcome is out of their bands. A motorcyclist when jumps across a narrow canyon will get the fastest, strongest bike available that will carry him or her across the canyon, however, wind conditions or other problems might interfere and the cyclist my fall short of his goal.
Many people have the same traits of course. Many of us are risk takers, optimists and fatalists. But I think people who play dangerous sports must have these characteristics in abundance.
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