请英语高手帮我修改下我的自我介绍~~
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请教英语高手帮我修改一下英语复试自我介绍，急用，谢谢了。~
这句话有问题....可以改成I was born in XX,and I have been living here for more than 20 years. You know(可以适当加一些类似这个的语气词，比如WELL啊，ACTUALLY啊，特别是在你停顿的时候)，it is a dynamic city.
I am studying in xxx university ,my undergraduate course will be finished in July
有点复杂啊....直接说I am a student of xxx university, and I will graduate in July.
and now，I am trying my best for seize the opportunity to enter the XX university。
改成Acutally, I try my best to seize the opportunity for further study in xx university.(貌似你是想考某大学的研究生吧...我猜测)
Second, I will be introduce 大学的学习生活（不会说） ，my major is law ，and i like my specialty very much 。
first都没有出来呐，哪来的second啊....改成：First, I would like to introduce my college life. I am major in law, and in fact, I am fond of my specialty.
Besides school hours ，i had practice in court during the past holiday 。
继续改....Well, I once did the practice in court during the last (summer/winter) holiday.
下面接着改啊~
In my Internship , i could not only make the most of my professional knowledge, but also absorb some noble experience,such as how to get along with others and how to deal with some tough problems。Of course, the greatest gain is how to demonstrate "team spirit".
第三段我整体改了哈~
There is indeed a heavy crop during my four-year college life, which provides a big stage for me to improve my comprehensive ability, ranging from the study to the daily life.
最后的关于make friends啊，前面有提到过了，这里就不要了，然后接着继续改~
In fact, I am eager to reach a new height. Therefore, I am determined to continue my study. I believe the postgraduate study can not only enlarge my knowledge but make me more competent in the future as well.
Ok, that's all. Thank you very much!
恩，基本上就是这样啦~~~~
我再重新把整篇发一遍。也许写的也不是特别好，但是我尽力啦~~
Good morning dear professors：
I am glad to attend the interview.Let me introduce myself.My name is _(中文名)___，and you can call me___(英文名)____。I was born in XX,and I have been living here for 23 years. You know，it is a beautiful and dynamic city.I study in xxx university, and I will graduate in July. Acutally, I try my best to seize the opportunity for further study in xx university.
First, I would like to introduce my college life. I am major in law, and in fact, I am fond of my specialty.Well, I once did the practice in court during the last (summer/winter) holiday.In my Internship , i could not only make the most of my professional knowledge, but also absorb some noble experience,such as how to get along with others and how to deal with some tough problems。Of course, the greatest gain is how to demonstrate "team spirit".
Well, there is indeed a heavy crop during my four-year college life, which provides a big stage for me to improve my comprehensive ability, ranging from the study to the daily life.
In fact, I am eager to reach a new height. Therefore, I am determined to continue my study. I believe the postgraduate study can not only enlarge my knowledge but make me more competent in the future as well.
Ok, that's all. Thank you very much!
i was born here ,so xx is my hometown, we know which is a really beautiful city
这句话有问题....可以改成I was born in XX,and I have been living here for more than 20 years. You know(可以适当加一些类似这个的语气词，比如WELL啊，ACTUALLY啊，特别是在你停顿的时候)，it is a dynamic city.
I am studying in xxx university ,my undergraduate course will be finished in July
有点复杂啊....直接说I am a student of xxx university, and I will graduate in July.
and now，I am trying my best for seize the opportunity to enter the XX university。
改成Acutally, I try my best to seize the opportunity for further study in xx university.(貌似你是想考某大学的研究生吧...我猜测)
Second, I will be introduce 大学的学习生活（不会说） ，my major is law ，and i like my specialty very much 。
first都没有出来呐，哪来的second啊....改成：First, I would like to introduce my college life. I am major in law, and in fact, I am fond of my specialty.
Besides school hours ，i had practice in court during the past holiday 。
继续改....Well, I once did the practice in court during the last (summer/winter) holiday.
下面接着改啊~
In my Internship , i could not only make the most of my professional knowledge, but also absorb some noble experience,such as how to get along with others and how to deal with some tough problems。Of course, the greatest gain is how to demonstrate "team spirit".
第三段我整体改了哈~
There is indeed a heavy crop during my four-year college life, which provides a big stage for me to improve my comprehensive ability, ranging from the study to the daily life.
最后的关于make friends啊，前面有提到过了，这里就不要了，然后接着继续改~
In fact, I am eager to reach a new height. Therefore, I am determined to continue my study. I believe the postgraduate study can not only enlarge my knowledge but make me more competent in the future as well.
Ok, that's all. Thank you very much!
恩，基本上就是这样啦~~~~
我再重新把整篇发一遍。也许写的也不是特别好，但是我尽力啦~~
Good morning dear professors：
I am glad to attend the interview.Let me introduce myself.My name is _(中文名)___，and you can call me___(英文名)____。I was born in XX,and I have been living here for 23 years. You know，it is a beautiful and dynamic city.I study in xxx university, and I will graduate in July. Acutally, I try my best to seize the opportunity for further study in xx university.
First, I would like to introduce my college life. I am major in law, and in fact, I am fond of my specialty.Well, I once did the practice in court during the last (summer/winter) holiday.In my Internship , i could not only make the most of my professional knowledge, but also absorb some noble experience,such as how to get along with others and how to deal with some tough problems。Of course, the greatest gain is how to demonstrate "team spirit".
Well, there is indeed a heavy crop during my four-year college life, which provides a big stage for me to improve my comprehensive ability, ranging from the study to the daily life.
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Good afternoon, dear professors!
It is my great honor to be here for this interview. My name is xxx. I’m 23years old and I come from a very beautiful Coastal city –青岛。I'll graduate from xxxUniversity in July 2011,and my major is***. Meanwhile, I am aiming for the continuous studies of xx专业 in XX学校.
I have been working diligently which helps me lay a solid foundation for further study and application. I am an energetic man. Therefore I am always interested in fresh things. when facing a setback, I will take an optimistic view . I am also a perseverant person. Once I set a goal, I will fight for it with all my efforts until it is realised. Besides,I am also an easygoing person who enjoys a fine relationship with people around and at the same time, I have good communication skills and team spirit.
In my spare time, I like doing some sports and reading some news. Table tennis and jogging are my favorite sport. They keep me in good health, full of energy and breed optimism towards life. By reading news, I could know what’s going on in the society.
I have long admired XX学校because of its highly qualified faculty and strong academic environment in the field of XX专业。I am confident that I am a very qualified applicant for your subject group.
People always said when you get up in the morning, you have 2 choices: (1) go on sleeping, go on dreaming; (2) get up to pursue your dream. I'll choose the 2nd choice - to pursue my dream. I sincerely hope that you, dear Professors , will grant me a chance to pursue my dream
呵呵后面还没改呢，你先看看吧
my name is *** I am **years ago......
i was born here ,so xx is my hometown, we know which is a really beautiful city这句话有问题....可以改成I was born in XX,and I have been living here for more than 20 years. You know(可以适当加一些类似这个的语气词，比如WELL啊，ACTUALLY啊，特别是在你停顿的时候)，it is a dynamic city.
I am studying in xxx university ,my undergraduate course will be finished in July
有点复杂啊....直接说I am a student of xxx university, and I will graduate in July.
and now，I am trying my best for seize the opportunity to enter the XX university。
改成Acutally, I try my best to seize the opportunity for further study in xx university.(貌似你是想考某大学的研究生吧...我猜测)
Second, I will be introduce 大学的学习生活（不会说） ，my major is law ，and i like my specialty very much 。
first都没有出来呐，哪来的second啊....改成：First, I would like to introduce my college life. I am major in law, and in fact, I am fond of my specialty.
Besides school hours ，i had practice in court during the past holiday 。
继续改....Well, I once did the practice in court during the last (summer/winter) holiday.
下面接着改啊~
In my Internship , i could not only make the most of my professional knowledge, but also absorb some noble experience,such as how to get along with others and how to deal with some tough problems。Of course, the greatest gain is how to demonstrate "team spirit".
第三段我整体改了哈~
There is indeed a heavy crop during my four-year college life, which provides a big stage for me to improve my comprehensive ability, ranging from the study to the daily life.
最后的关于make friends啊，前面有提到过了，这里就不要了，然后接着继续改~
In fact, I am eager to reach a new height. Therefore, I am determined to continue my study. I believe the postgraduate study can not only enlarge my knowledge but make me more competent in the future as well.
Ok, that's all. Thank you very much!
恩，基本上就是这样啦~~~~
我再重新把整篇发一遍。也许写的也不是特别好，但是我尽力啦~~
Good morning dear professors：
I am glad to attend the interview.Let me introduce myself.My name is _(中文名)___，and you can call me___(英文名)____。I was born in XX,and I have been living here for 23 years. You know，it is a beautiful and dynamic city.I study in xxx university, and I will graduate in July. Acutally, I try my best to seize the opportunity for further study in xx university.
First, I would like to introduce my college life. I am major in law, and in fact, I am fond of my specialty.Well, I once did the practice in court during the last (summer/winter) holiday.In my Internship , i could not only make the most of my professional knowledge, but also absorb some noble experience,such as how to get along with others and how to deal with some tough problems。Of course, the greatest gain is how to demonstrate "team spirit".
Well, there is indeed a heavy crop during my four-year college life, which provides a big stage for me to improve my comprehensive ability, ranging from the study to the daily life.
In fact, I am eager to reach a new height. Therefore, I am determined to continue my study. I believe the postgraduate study can not only enlarge my knowledge but make me more competent in the future as well.
Ok, that's all. Thank you very much!
i was born here ,so xx is my hometown, we know which is a really beautiful city
这句话有问题....可以改成I was born in XX,and I have been living here for more than 20 years. You know(可以适当加一些类似这个的语气词，比如WELL啊，ACTUALLY啊，特别是在你停顿的时候)，it is a dynamic city.
I am studying in xxx university ,my undergraduate course will be finished in July
有点复杂啊....直接说I am a student of xxx university, and I will graduate in July.
and now，I am trying my best for seize the opportunity to enter the XX university。
改成Acutally, I try my best to seize the opportunity for further study in xx university.(貌似你是想考某大学的研究生吧...我猜测)
Second, I will be introduce 大学的学习生活（不会说） ，my major is law ，and i like my specialty very much 。
first都没有出来呐，哪来的second啊....改成：First, I would like to introduce my college life. I am major in law, and in fact, I am fond of my specialty.
Besides school hours ，i had practice in court during the past holiday 。
继续改....Well, I once did the practice in court during the last (summer/winter) holiday.
下面接着改啊~
In my Internship , i could not only make the most of my professional knowledge, but also absorb some noble experience,such as how to get along with others and how to deal with some tough problems。Of course, the greatest gain is how to demonstrate "team spirit".
第三段我整体改了哈~
There is indeed a heavy crop during my four-year college life, which provides a big stage for me to improve my comprehensive ability, ranging from the study to the daily life.
最后的关于make friends啊，前面有提到过了，这里就不要了，然后接着继续改~
In fact, I am eager to reach a new height. Therefore, I am determined to continue my study. I believe the postgraduate study can not only enlarge my knowledge but make me more competent in the future as well.
Ok, that's all. Thank you very much!
恩，基本上就是这样啦~~~~
我再重新把整篇发一遍。也许写的也不是特别好，但是我尽力啦~~
Good morning dear professors：
I am glad to attend the interview.Let me introduce myself.My name is _(中文名)___，and you can call me___(英文名)____。I was born in XX,and I have been living here for 23 years. You know，it is a beautiful and dynamic city.I study in xxx university, and I will graduate in July. Acutally, I try my best to seize the opportunity for further study in xx university.
First, I would like to introduce my college life. I am major in law, and in fact, I am fond of my specialty.Well, I once did the practice in court during the last (summer/winter) holiday.In my Internship , i could not only make the most of my professional knowledge, but also absorb some noble experience,such as how to get along with others and how to deal with some tough problems。Of course, the greatest gain is how to demonstrate "team spirit".
Well, there is indeed a heavy crop during my four-year college life, which provides a big stage for me to improve my comprehensive ability, ranging from the study to the daily life.
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霍琦荣apprecaition. Thanks for your time , Good Day 时间有限大致看了下， 你这应该是申请学校的自我介绍， 我提点建议， 写出来的自我介绍要让别人很快了解你， 语言要通俗点，不用很繁琐， 最主要是人家能看懂你的意思，。而且要多突出你的能力，这些你自己再结合自己的自身情况稍作修改就可以了 ...
霍琦荣Hello! my name is ..., I am 21 years old.I come from Baishan City, Jilin Province.I studied computer engineer at school\/ My major is computer engineer.I have a cheerful personality, a wide range of interest, and dillengence.If I to an opportunity to get this position, I'...
霍琦荣我呢，喜欢溜冰，上网，跳舞。And I like skating, browsing the websites and dancing.大家看我可能不像一个体育生，但是刚好过了分数线哦。Maybe I don't look like a sports specialized ,still I have just passed the exam.我是一个会喝酒但是不喜欢喝酒的男孩，想放到我的尽管来吧 I am a...
霍琦荣Hello everyone, my name is Wang Tao, I come from Foshan. thank you for giving me this opportunity to exercise and learn. I have a college degree, have received a formal education, have a very solid theoretical foundation, have more than a year of internship in bed supervision,...
霍琦荣everybody teacher, my name is XX, the English name called 'Joe' 19-year-old, I have a healthy body. I like to play basketball, table tennis and ice skating, a person like the Internet when at home or listening to music, not like a long time immersed in the world of ...
霍琦荣英文自我介绍范文 good morning,my dear teachers,my dear professors.i am very glad to be here for your interview.my name is song yonghao,i am 22 years old .i come from luoyang,a very beautiful aicent city.my undergratuade period will be accomplished in changan university in july...
霍琦荣Good morning,everyone,my name is ***.I'm 13years old now.I come from Hangzhou Zhejiang.I'm a quiet girl.In my study,I love Maths better.During my free time,I like listening to music,playing computer可以换一下 参考资料：本站 ...
霍琦荣I can speak a little bit of English, so next, I will be introducing myself.My name is Danni(哇，名字好厉害，居然可以是一个英文名) Yang, I came from a place in China called NanChang, and I am 20 years old. from my point of view, I am extrovert and enthusiastic, not ...
霍琦荣hello,everybody!I am very glad to be here with you today, and welcome to our class, MR(MRS)xx(外教名，先表示一下友好嘛)。I am xx, from xx.Just like all the boys,I like basketball and making frinds. Althoung we are not so familiar with each other now ,I believe we ...
