麻烦各位帮忙检查一下这篇文章的语法错误，谢谢啦！

麻烦各位帮忙检查一下这篇文章的语法错误，谢谢！~

第一段中especially 后加上of, 另外for mainly two reasons改为mainly for two reasons. 第二段中in the nature应该去掉the，另外such as rebuild the bamboo forest and breed pandas artificially中，后面的2个动词应改为rebuilding...and breeding...第三段中land deficient simply by constructing 估计你笔误，应为land deficiency吧？ such a small place is 中such应大写。family plan.应该是你开始提到的family planning即计划生育吧？最后一段中，the lovely animals can only be seen in books in the future is certainly the last thing we want to see.应句首加一个that引导主语从句。That lovely animals can... 另外可以把only放在in books之前强调。

In conclusion, there is no doubt for me that students should study at traditional school(S) rather than study at home, because they can both learn useful skills and focus on studies at school instead of becoming an indoor(s) man who stay(S) at home all the time and cannot integrate into society.

整体来看这篇文章写的还是蛮不错的~就是几个地方帮你提一下..
1.However, whether students should study at traditional school or not different people may have different opinions.最好中间逗号下.different前面.
2. I strongly suggest that we must not abandon traditional schools.... must不对,suggest后面表示建议应该是should,或者省略
3.that I will outline below...outline这个词似乎不太恰当..List,mention什么都可以
4.such as playing computer games or watching movies and consequently ruin their studies. 这里and以后如果想表示并列,ruin...ing
5.which is nearly impossible when studying at home.这里nearly用almost会比较好

非常感谢！另外还想问一下，nearly和almost具体有什么区别呢？
(1) 两者都可用来修饰不定代词、形容词、副词、动词、介词短语等，此时两者常可换用：
It’s almost [nearly] impossible. 那几乎是不可能的。
He almost [nearly] always arrives late. 他差不多总是迟到。
The girl nearly(almost)fainted. 这姑娘差点(几乎)晕倒了。
They have almost [nearly] run out of food. 他们的食品几乎(差不多)已经吃完了。
He went out almost [nearly] every evening. 他几乎(差不多)每天晚上都出去。
It was nearly [almost] five thirty. 几乎已经五点半了。
He fell and almost [nearly] broke his leg. 他摔了一跤，险些摔断了腿。
(2) almost 可用于 any 以及 no, none, nobody, nothing, never 等否定词之前，但 nearly 一般不这样用：
Almost any man can do it. 几乎任何人都会做。
Almost no one came to the party. 几乎没有人来参加晚会。
但是，两者都可用在否定动词之前：
He almost [nearly] didn’t catch the bus. 他差点没赶上公共汽车。
(3) nearly 前可用 very, pretty, not 等词修饰，但 almost 之前不能用这些词：
It’s not nearly so difficult as you think. 这远不像你想像的那么难。
【注】not nearly 意为“远非”, very [pretty] nearly 意为“几乎”，都是习语。
(4) 有时 almost 可表示十分相似(但又不完全相同)，此时不用 nearly：
I almost wish I’d stayed at home. 我真有点后悔没在家里呆着。

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