写一篇英语作文80字《My problem》、要求：我是一名中学生、我很喜欢我的学校，但我也有烦恼、在学校没...
My problem I’m a Grade 9 student. I enjoy painting very much. However, I’m very busy and I usually cannot find enough time to do the things I like to do. In fact, many students of my age feel stressed. One main cause of stress is too much homework. We do not know when to work and when to play. I can’t achieve a balance between the two. So I have to give up my hobby. Do you have the same problem? How do you deal with it? 试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。材料中已经给出了要写的内容。在写作时，要组织好语言，将内容陈述清楚。并要注意句子之间的衔接，合理的利用连词。另外可以适当的使用一些复杂的句子，例如掌握好了的定语从句等。可以使文章更有亮点。【亮点分析】这篇文章紧扣材料，表述准确流畅。文中有很多精彩的短语和句子。例如：However, I’m very busy and I usually cannot find enough time to do the things I like to do.然而，我很忙，经常没有时间做我喜欢的事情。However然而，连词的使用使文章更富有逻辑；I like to do定语从句，修饰things; too much太多；We do not know when to work and when to play.我们不知道什么时候学习什么时候玩，句中出现了两个并列的宾语从句。Give up放弃；deal with解决，等等。
Our School我的学校
Good morning, my dear teachers and friends! My name is Li Bingke, from class four O five.Today, I am very happy to be here.My topic is “Our School”.早上好，我亲爱的老师和朋友们!我的名字是李Bingke ，来自一流的四个ö 5 。今天，我很高兴到这里来。我的主题是“我们的学校” 。
My dear friends, welcome to our school! My school is very beautiful! It has a big playground.We can play and do some sports there.Near the playground, there is a garden.Many trees and flowers are there.So the air is very clean and we can hear birds singing in the trees.It is so wonderful.Our teaching buildings are around the garden and look like our teachers’ arms to welcome us.We can draw pictures in the art room on the first floor and read story-books in the library on the second floor.My classroom is on the third floor.It is clean and bright. We like to study in it.The computer room is on the fifth floor.We can sing and dance in the music room on the sixth floor.What a lot of fun! We can have lunch in the canteen near Defang Teaching Building.我亲爱的朋友，欢迎来到我们的学校!我的学校是一个很漂亮的!它有一个大操场。我们可以发挥，也有一些运动。附近的操场，有一个花园。许多树木和花草在那里。因此，空气很干净，我们可以听到鸟儿在树上歌唱。这是如此美妙。我们的教学楼是周围的花园和看起来像我们的老师的怀抱欢迎我们。我们可以画画的美术室一楼和阅读故事书在图书馆的二楼。我的教室在三楼。这是清洁和光亮。 我们要研究它。电脑室是五楼。我们可以唱歌跳舞的音乐室六楼。什么有很多乐趣!我们可以在食堂午餐附近德芳教学楼。
In our school, our teachers work hard and help us with our lessons.We study hard and listen to teachers carefully.After class, our teachers play with us and we feel very happy.在我们的学校，我们的教师努力工作，帮助我们与我们的经验教训。我们努力学习，认真听取教师。下了课，发挥我们的教师与我们联系，我们感到非常高兴。
Our school is so nice and our teachers are so kind.We all love them.Dear friends, do you like them?我们学校是太好，我们的教师是太好了。我们都爱他们。亲爱的朋友们，你喜欢他们吗?
That's all.Thanks!演讲到此结束！谢谢大家！
But every student has some problems,my problem is that I have no friends.
答案太长提交不上去怎么办？我已经写好了，怎么联系你? 你很急吗
写一篇英语作文80字《My problem》、要求：我是一名中学生、我很喜欢我的学校，但我也有烦恼、在学校没...视频
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