我有一篇英语自我介绍,请哪位高手帮我看看有没有语法错误!

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我有一篇英语自我介绍,哪位高手帮我看看都有啥错误。~

如果这个介绍是你在面试开头用的,说完了以后还有其他面试程序,最好别说thank you for your time。就用thanks好了。
thank you for your time往往是在面试的结尾,所有的程序都结束了以后,告别时候用的。
另外 MINZU university 是什么?民族?那应该用英语萨, 不过好像 people已经给人民大学用咯,呵呵,这是你们学校的官方翻译吗?最好查查, 不行用peoples' university 好了
其他一些语法:
i'm from beijing , a very busy city,where there are a lot of people。
i like sports, swimming, badminton, yoga etc.

i hope you enjoy it 也建议删掉,工作面试讲这个好像不伦不类。最后就说,that's all, thanks。

请补全问题,我是英语本科生,四级分数547,虽然分数一般,但是足以解决基本常见英语问题

Good morning,everyone.My name is Chen Yuhan.I'm a Chinese girl. I come from China.I live in Chongqing.I like Chongqing very much because I think it's a very beautiful city.I'm 12 years old and my birthday is June 12th.I can speak Chinese, a little English and Japanese.Purple is my favorite color.I like tennis and soccer.I usually play tennis with my friend.I like music,too. I can sing and dance.But I can't play trumpet.My favorite subject isn't music.I like English and math best.I think English is so interesting,math is difficult but interesting.I like eating vegetables and fruits.Lemon is my favorite fruit and tomato is my favorite vegetable.
I go to school from Monday to Friday.I join the music club and English club.I have lots of friends in the music club and English club.I like going to movies with my friends.My favorite movies are comedies.They are too fun!
I'd like to be your friend.

是very much,而且应该直接说I love Chongqing very much这个感情更丰富些
是purple

最好是说:Ilike playing tennis and soccer
从I can sing...开始都改,前后都没有关系啊
为什么喜欢音乐就能唱歌跳舞啊,怎么又开始说不会吹喇叭了呢
后面明明说最喜欢的科目是音乐
结果有最喜欢英语和数学
记住,只要是挨着的,且用了同一个形容词,都要加too
我喜欢吃什么就可以直接说食物名称,不用说类别,人类都吃这两样
join此处应该用过去式
后面不要重复说这两个俱乐部的名称
直接说them
movie复数时,最好说名字,但你后面说comedy,就是一种类型,最好说
My favorite movie type is comedy
而且comedy不能变复数,喜剧没有复数形式,变复数就只有趣的事情了
你应该在认真点。初学者更应该细心
纯正美语,希望加分,也希望有帮到你,我急用分,谢谢

1,I'm a chi. girl 与I come from China重复,保留一句即可。更不能加SO,那就二了。
2,I like Chongqing very much because it's a beautiful city.
3,Purple is my favorite color.
4, with my friends.
5,It's too fun! 主语应为复数,是许多卡通片,不是一部。所以They're so funny!


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