高分 在写一篇英语作文，个别句写得不好，希望帮忙翻一下。
Tom is a boy. He is very busy. He likes sports and music.At 6:00 in the morning, he is getting up. At 7:00, he is having breadfast. After breadfast, he is playing soccer at 8:00. At 9:00, he is running around his house. At 10:00, he is singing and dancing with his friends. At 12:00, he is having lunch.
Hello everybody. Myname is Nike. I am secondary school student. I am an active boy. I like making friends and chat with people. I am also a hard working student especially do the thing I am interested in. For example, I like dance very much. One year ago I began to dance every evening. No matter what bad weather it is, I will keep on doing and never give up. Well, in my free time, I have many interests. Exceptfor dancing, English is another interest I have. I think English is an international language. It is very important, so I study it hard. I often read some English book to improve my English skills. But I know my English is notgood enough. I will continue studying. That’s all.
1 我在今年接触了TFBOYS，最先看的是《魔法城堡》的MV和现场版。I came in contact with 'TFBOYS' this year. At first, I watched their movie videos 'The magic castle' and their live version.
2 我也稍微看了汪东城、吴尊主演的电视剧。
I had a glance over Jiro Wang and Chun Wu's TV dramas
3 我之前喜欢刘德华，但我现在更喜欢张学友。
I used to like Andy Lau but now I like Jacky Cheung Hok-yau even more.
4 我看网上看到了新出的MV，非常赞，而且制作精良，我在网上也预订了新专辑。
I saw the new movie video online and I must say that I really praised it highly, it also with an excellent production quality, which I have already ordered the new album online.
5 希望SHE能有更好地发展。
I am hoping that 'SHE' will have a better future development.
我亦已替你翻译了上一道提问，而且很感谢你的采纳。
同时也是要谢谢你向本团求助。
【很希望我的回答会对你有帮助。如有不明白，可以再追问，若满意请采纳，谢谢你，并祝你进步!】
我在今年接触了TFBOYS，最先看的是《魔法城堡》的MV和现场版。
I had come into contact with "TFBOYS"and watch 《the magic castle》and "mv"alive at first.
2. 我也稍微看了汪东城、吴尊主演的电视剧。
I had watch on TV darama wich played by Wang dongcheng and Wuzun.
3. 我之前喜欢刘德华，但我现在更喜欢张学友。
I like Andy Lau before but now,I like XueyouZhang anymmore.
4. 我看网上看到了新出的MV，非常赞，而且制作精良，我在网上也预订了新专辑。
I find that a new MV appered on the internet,wich is well-made,so I had reserv the new album，It's pretty good.
5.希望SHE能有更好地发展。
I hope that "S-H-E" will have a better devolopment.
1、I have learned about the TFBOYS this year，and what I first watched is 《Magic Castle》with MV and live version
2、I also watched fews of TV plays which Wangdongcheng and Wuzun starred in
3、I used to like Andy Lau，but now I prefer to Jacky Cheung
4、I find the new album MV online with well-made and fine quality，so I booked it online
5、I wish SHe has a better prospects
高分 在写一篇英语作文，个别句写得不好，希望帮忙翻一下。视频
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