请帮我看看这段话有没有语法错误
基本没错，要说有错的话，可能这里有点问题： I learn violin by myself and now I can play several songs，
songs是歌曲，带歌词的歌曲，是人演唱的，而小提琴演奏的应该是音乐，用music可能更准确些
Nowadays, university students should have responsibility to excavate and drive traditional holidays and modern holidays. From the tradition of Valentine’s Day and Qixi festival, we know that China and western countries all have romantic legends. From the celebration of the Chinese New Year’s Day (the Spring Festival) and American New Year’s Day, we know that each country has its own ways to celebrate festivals,different countries have different ways to celebrate their festivals,and different festivals have different meanings. At the same time, university students are able to understand western festival’s custom and its meaning as great as Chinese national festivals’.These cultural information reflect some social style, traditional custom, thinking manner, and even the philosophy. Furthermore, these festival cultures can improve cross-cultural communication ability. There are a lot of different characteristics between Chinese holiday culture and western holiday culture. Following Chinese and western holiday culture mutually affect and combine, it will bring a nice gospel to people.
你如果把汉语的摘要也放上来，应该可以改的更好。
不过话说回来，你自己多看几遍，也会该的很好的。
I know that it is such a huge number, and without it, I will have to give up XX, which is definitely my dream school in the U.S. Maybe things would be a little bit different if my mother had not been so sick since 3 months ago. It was definitely a hard time for my family and me and it took so much time and money to heal my mother. But she, my dear mom, even wanted to give up the healing to save money to make it more possible for me to enter my dream school in the U.S. at the beginning. Of course I denied her original thought immediately. Fortunately, she is now becoming better and better and I believe she may leave hospital soon in the future. I seldom told others about my mom’s sickness, but here I told you to explain why I need that much money to enter the college.
祝你学习进步！
望采纳，多谢！^_^
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