09-11年 安徽高考英语满分作文
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热烈祝贺xxxx完全命中2013年安徽高考英语作文题
预测七：交通规则与人文素质（中国式过马路、酒后驾驶）
预测题（1）中国式过马路
最近，你将参加一个英语作文比赛。要求参赛者根据下面的这幅漫画进行写作。请按照下面的提示，写一篇120字左右的英语短文。
1、这幅画反映了当前的一种什么现象？
2、分析出现这种现象的原因；
3、针对这个现象发表看法。
生词提示：中国式过马路：Chinese style of crossing road 红绿灯：traffic light
【参考答案】
The picture shows what the Chinese style of crossing the street is. It is clear that some pedestrians tend to run the red light in groups when crossing the street. This phenomenon has attracted widespread concern in China. There are two main reasons behind this phenomenon. Some people are always in a hurry, so they ignore the traffic signal to save time. Others lack safety awareness,thinking drivers have to stop because so many people cross the street together. Actually running the red light is very dangerous because it may lead to more traffic jams and accidents. I hope immediate measures should be taken to prevent this bad behavior. First, the public should be educated to follow the traffic rules. Second, more overpasses should be built to make it easy to cross the street. Besides, whoever breaks the traffic rules should be severely punished. By doing so, we will be able to get around safely.
【相关报道】2013安徽高考外语考试结束 英语作文与中国式过马路有关
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6月8日，2013安徽高考外语考试结束，合肥八中、六中等考点的考生已陆续地走出考场。据合肥八中考点的一位孟姓考生介绍，英语试题不难，听力也很清楚，作文题目涉及当下的时事热点，教导行人车辆遵守交通规则。
合肥市十一中张姓考生说，英语考试和模考难度差不多，完型填空和阅读均不是很难，单选是自己的弱项，英语作文是以“遵守文明，从我做起”为题，写120字的作文。（吴婷婷 黄丛萍）
2009年广东高考英语满分作文
Should tourists take photos with animals？
Koalas in wildlife parks can‘t fall asleep because tourists keep disturbing them. The movement is thinking to make the tourists’ behaviour illegal to protect the animals.
When people are visiting wildlife parks， they like to take photographs with animals. Reasons for this are varied. Some people may think taking photos with animals are funny in contrast with taking photos with other persons. Others may think that it will be an interesting experience to take photos with animals during their visit.
If I were an animal in the wildlife park， I would feel annoyed when people keep photographing with me. My life would be greatly influenced and I wouldn‘t feel happy at all！ I think I should have some private space and time to relax myself.
However， I don‘t agree if it is announced illegal to take photos with animals. Tourists pay for tickets to visit the wildlife park and it will be a pity for them if they can’t have a photo with an animal. Perhaps wildlife parks can set some special time， during which tourists can take photos with animals. It can both satisfy tourists and protect the animals.
2009年的年广东高考英语满分作文
游客应该给动物拍照吗？
考拉在野生动物公园不能入睡，因为他们令人不安的游客不断。不结盟运动思想，使游客的非法行为，以保护动物。
当人们正在访问的野生动物公园，他们喜欢与动物拍照留念。原因是多种多样的。一些人可能认为拍照与动物的有趣的对比拍照与其他人。其他人可能认为，这将是一个有趣的经验，与动物拍照访问期间。
如果我是一种动物的野生动物园，我会感到恼火的人不断拍照时，与我。我的生活将得到极大的影响，我不会感到高兴了！我想我应该有一些私人的空间和时间来放松消遣。
但是，我不同意，如果它是非法宣布采取与动物的照片。游客支付门票参观野生动物园，将是很可惜的，如果他们不能的照片，一种动物。也许野生动物公园可以设置一些特殊的时间，在此期间，游客可以与动物的照片。它既能满足游客和保护动物。
假设你是李华，作为选派的交流学生在美国某中学学习了一年，寄住在Mr. Brown家里，刚回到国内。回国后，你发现自己的一本英语词典遗忘在他家，因此给他写了一封信，请他帮助寄回词典。信的主要内容如下：
感谢在美国期间他所提供的帮助
一本英语词典忘记带回
词典是美国老师送的，非常珍贵
词典很可能丢在卧室的书架上
邮资自己付
注意：
1、词数100左右;信的开头和结尾已为你写好。
2、可适当增加细节，使行文连贯
3、参考词汇：邮资-postage
Dear Mr. Brown,
I have been back, and write this letter to show my thanks. As the exchange student, you make me feel warm. Welcome to my country ,I’ll show you around in turn.
However , there exists a problem that I have left my dictionary at your home. I like it very much , for it was a precious gift from my teacher who comes from the U.S. I guess that my book may stay on your shelf in the bedroom .
Do you mind if you send my dictionary to me? I will pay for the postage and I’ll be very grateful if you show your warmness again.
I’m eager to receive your reply.
Yours,
Li hua
[名师点评]
本文作为信件，首先其格式是正确的。既然是应用文，那么文章的意图就要明确表示出来，本文在表达作者写作意图的时候，情真意切，用词委婉而合理。文章不但使用了定语从句，还采用了疑问句，让句式变化而不呆板。
2007【安徽卷】【试题回放】
假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：
l 表示赞成。 l 提出你喜欢的栏目。 l 简要说明理由。
注意： 1. 词数100左右。 2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。
3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 4. 参考栏目：栏目—column
Dear Mr. Green,
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.
Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.
Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省该年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, can't wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到这种程度，不可谓不让人佩服。
2011高考英语满分作文赏析
作文题目
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。
注意：
1.词数：100左右：
2.参考词汇：房租—Tent(n.).
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以 ‘which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。
Dear Bob,
Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.
I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.
Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.
Best wishes !
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。
Dear Bob,
How are you these days?
I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.
There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。
作文：
Dear Bob,
I’m glad to hear from you.
Welcome to our city in september. I’ve found a suitable house for you.
The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.
It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.
Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. I’ll try my best to help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文内容详实，描述具体细腻，用词适当准确，如“suitable house”、“not far from’’等，另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。
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