求一篇写家人的英语作文,写妈妈在干什么,弟弟在干什么,等等。不少6句话。有好评!

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求一篇写家人的作文,写妈妈在干嘛,弟弟在干嘛,哥哥在干嘛等等不少五句话。有好评!~

……这种作文,无语中

想写好作文,在我看来,无非有以下几点:
1.严谨的布局:
正所谓万事开头难,不过只要开了个好头,这篇作文就会很好写了。
凤头:是文章的首段,是阅卷老师首先入眼的地方,一定要做好整篇文章的中心把握,要做到下文与首段上下连贯,紧密结合,要通过开头使下文有可写之处,开头要达到让阅卷老师耳目一新的效果。例如,巧用排比,比喻,拟人等修辞手法,并且通过这些修辞手法,而统领全文主旨。
猪肚:在一篇上好的文章中,分段都会恰到好处,而当文章中只有一大段或两三段时,这篇文章即使文采再出众,也不会有太高的分数,因为阅卷老师在中考判卷时,每三分钟就要判出一份作文,工作量相当大,如果不善于分段,阅卷老师可能失去耐心,从而看不完,就会草草的给出分数。所以,在我看来,一篇文章至少要分 6-8个段,但不是一行或几行一段,而是要看起来像豆腐块,一块块整齐的排列在一起,使文章紧中有松,松弛有度。要看上去整篇文章是一个整体,而不是零散的。2014中考作文写作技巧及方法
豹尾:在文章的最后处,应当让主题更突出鲜明,升华主题思想,使豹尾抽起来!或让人感到峰回路转,柳暗花明或更进一步的特殊效果。在文章末尾,应当再次点题,紧扣中心思想,让贯穿始终的中心思想继续延伸,引人深思。特别是要在结尾处,与开头形成呼应,对比,递进等等,来引发阅读老师的共鸣!
2.细腻的文笔:不管是记叙,议论还是散文;不管是写人写事还是写景。都要用细腻的文笔呈现出来,使文章中点更突出,让阅卷老师在看试卷的过程中,有深思,放慢阅读速度和重复阅读的情况出现,让阅卷老师身临其境,从而使文章更具灵性。
3.贯穿始终的思想感情:在一篇布局格式上很得当,错落有致的文章上,还必须要有一条贯穿始终的思想路线,这条线就像鱼的脊椎一样重要,这条线一定要清晰,明确,千万不可含混不清。
把握好这几点,一篇好的中考作文已经大致成型,不过要想在中考中脱颖而出,这仅仅是开始。

1.

It is 7 o'clock in the morning.After breakfast,my family are doing different things of their own.My mother is doing some washing in the washing room.She always wash some clothes in the morning.My father will go to work at this time .And my grandfather is watching the TV morning news.It is his habbit of years.I will go to school for my study.Because of too much things i will do,I usually spend most of the time on my housework.This is my family in the morning.We are also bussy but happy.

2.
There are three people in my family. We are very busy every day. At 6:30 in the morning,my mother is the first one to get up and makes breakfast for us. Then at about 7 o'clock , my father and I get up.After breakfast, I go to school on my bike.My father and mother go to work by bus together. I have lunch at schol at about 12 o'clock and my parents have lunch at their office. In the afternoon. I often play basketball with my friends at 4:20.My father finish his work at about 5 o'clock ,He often does sports in the sports club with his friends. But my mother have to go home to do housework and make supper for us after work at about 4:30.We have supper at about 6:30.Then I do the dishes and my mother go out for a walk for half and hour..My father watches after supper. I usually go to bed at around 10 .My parents go to bed at about 11 o'clock


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