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Long Chingchuankang, you are the best!
China's 24 teams in the men's 56 kg class weightlifting gold medal in Olympic history is being rewritten last night. Long Chingchuankang spent six minutes, 6 test given to 132 kg snatch, clean and jerk 160 kg, 292 kg total score to win the gold medal. The 17-year-old "90 after" Junior, do not hide their ambition: "I will definitely be after more than Mutlu." This is a new era and the beginning! Young, passionate on behalf of the Chinese Weightlifting trend of development. He is expected to become a Mutlu after the brightest star. I still remember that match the situation and scene:
The real competition in the barbell weight added to 125 kg when just beginning, Long Chingchuankang barbell Juguotouding will be easy, and then off Indonesia's Tutuila million, Vietnam's handsome Huang, Chinese Taipei's Yang Jingyi have successfully completed this The weight of the barbell weight again raised to 128 kilograms, the second-Chingchuankang try again easily cite the success, at this time, this results in the same field the only remaining player Huang handsome and Iraqi million, and the two have been used Finished 3rd Test cite opportunities. Long Chingchuankang again play to the best of 132 kg snatch the end of the game, and to 132 kg in snatch to break the world youth record of accomplishments.
Then the clean and jerk competition began, Lung Chingchuankang look quite easily, he opened the weight of 155 kilograms, has the same option is also available in the weight of his two main rivals Huang handsome, this car-chul, has raised three This weight, this car-chul cite only the second successful test. Add barbell weight of 158 kg, the famous Iraqi Indonesia million to the end of the race results, then there are the only remaining gold medal hope-clear spring, yellow handsome, this car-chul and Yang Jingyi. Long Chingchuankang the second test given the weight of 160 kg is also a success, and this car-chul give 160 kilograms in the test failed, handsome Huang Ju is also the last time trial raised only 160 kilograms, then snatch the leading results-Chingchuankang这枚income has been the gold medal in the capsule, the final challenge of 164 kilograms while a failure, but despite the overall situation, the ultimate 17-year-old Long Chingchuankang to snatch 132 kg, clean and jerk 160 kg, 292 kg total score won the men's results 56 kg class title.

英语日记一般记录某一天发生的事件，或者是自己感受最深的一件事， 如一节课、一次郊游活动、一场晚会、一场体育比赛等等。
也可是观看某场电影、电视剧或阅读某一篇文章后的体会等。写英语日记要注意下面几点：


一、英语日记的格式

英语日记通常由两部分组成，即书端和正文。
书端指写日记的日期、星期和天气。英语日记的书端顶格写在正文上边的左边。
先写星期，再写日期。日期的写法与书信的相同。天气可写在正文的右上方或写在日期之后。
通常用形容词如Fine, Cloudy, Rainy, Windy, Foggy等。


二、英语日记的时态

由于日记记载的事情通常已经发生过，谓语动词多用一般过去时态。


三、写日记正文时应注意的问题

1. 考试中所给的话题作文通常把词数控制在100-120个单词。

2. 主题要突出。整篇日记要围绕一个主题来展开。切忌面面俱到，记流水帐。
因此，要精心选择内容，记下最有意义的、感受最深的内容。

3. 语言表达要贴切。写日记时，遣词造句要符合语法和英语习惯表达。切忌汉语句式表达。
如果我们不能用已学的语言知识来表达某种意思，最好换另一种同义的表达法。

4. 注意结构的完整性。在结尾要有结束语，用自己的感想或体会对前面的内容作总结。



请看范文：

Wednesday July 20, 2005 Fine

I had an unforgettable trip to Cambridge today.

The weather was fine today. My classmates and I went on a guided trip to Cambridge by coach. It took us about three hours to get there.

As soon as we got there, we were divided into several groups, with a professional guide to show us around. First, we were shown the King’s College, whose chapel (礼拜堂) impressed me most. It is the most spectacular (壮观的) building that I have ever seen. Then we visited other places such as Trinity College, and Fitzwilliam Museum. In the end, we walked along the Cambridge river and enjoyed the beautiful view.

Although tired, I spent the most exciting day in my life. I hope one day I can study in Cambridge University — my dream college.

My mother
My mother is very kind, but teaches to my study aspect specially strictly. I love her .
Remembered summer vacation a day evening, very late I was still looking television 0.1 meeting mothers have come, said: “Several, but also watches the television, sleeps quickly!”“Now has a vacation, will not need to attend class tomorrow.”Mother is angry as if very much, “had a vacation may live does not have the rule, might not need to rest? She resembles the artillery to ask in reply continuous lets me be speechless, had to turn off the television to sleep. Afterwards I said in a book that,The long time looked the television is not good to the eye. I understood now at last mother and to at that time did not understand mother feels ashamed.
My mother prepares food very delicious, he extremely is all friendly to each people, my mother is a good mother, good wife, good housewife. I love her forever!
我的妈妈
我的妈妈非常友善，但对我的学习方面管教特别严格.我非常爱她.
记得暑假的一天晚上，很晚了我仍然在看电视.一会妈妈来了，说：“几点了，还看电视，快去睡觉！”“现在是放假，明天也不用上课.”妈妈似乎很生气，“放假就可以生活没有规律了么，就可以不用休息了么？她连珠似炮得反问让我无话可说，只好关了电视去睡觉.后来我在一本书上说:长时间看电视对眼睛不好.我这才理解妈妈并对当时不理解妈妈感到惭愧.
我的妈妈做饭很好吃,他对每个人都非常友好，我的妈妈是一个好妈妈，好妻子，好的家庭主妇.我永远爱她！

January 13 2005
It was the first day of our winter holiday. All of us were very happy. Why? Because we have one months to do things we love to do. We are free. Although we have some homework. But we can finish them in several days. And the rest time we can make good use of. My god! We have been very tired after hard studying. In winter holidays, I want to have full sleep and eat good food in order to replenish myself. Last but not the least, I will have a good rest.

January 14 2005
It was the second day of our winter holiday. I felt good. I felt I’m free. I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Beijing. So I live alone but I don’t feel lonely. But I didn’t do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an English daily composition. It was my homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours. I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.

January 15 2005
It was the third day of our winter holiday. Today, there are many business in my mother’s company. So my mother told me to help my uncle who is the manager of my mother’s company. I sat in my mother’s office and help her answer the telephone. While I was free, I was writing my homework. Although I also have a lot of time to do my homework, I still do it. Because in my mother’s office, I had nothing to do. If I did nothing, I was wasting my time and my life. I can’t do the foolish thing. We should take good use of our time.

January 16 2005
It is a special day today. My mother sent one hundred basket of red bayberries. I like to eat red bayberries. It tastes nice. When they arrived in Shanghai, they were still fresh. But most of them would be sent to my mother’s business friends. I chose the best basket of red bayberries to eat. I put the rest in my refrigerator. Red bayberry is my hometown’s special product. It is well-known in china. Many people like to eat it.

January 17 2005
Today, I still went to my mother’s office. My mother was very busy, so was my father. They always live in Beijing. They must get up early. Because they will manage the factory. So I know they are very laborious. So I should save my money. Also I should help them. Although I can’t do something useful, but I think I should share the work with them. I am one of my family member. In the future, I will take a job and work. It’ time for me to begin to learn how to work.

January 18 2005
I have rested for a week. I began to feel bored. So I went out with my friends. They are my best friends in the middle school. We didn’t go to someplace special. We just saw the other. We had lunch together. While we were having lunch, we were still talking about the new school and new friends. Yes! A year later, we have grown riper. And we learned much more things and got new life. We haven’t enough time to play, to waste and to lose the way. We only have two years. Two years to go, we will get the real life which belongs to us.
January 19 2005
I have stayed in Shanghai alone for a week. It’s time for me to go to my real home—it is in Beijing. My parents are waiting for me. Although outside is no matter how beautiful, Beijing is still my home. In fact, there is many fresh things. Like red bayberries. In the afternoon, I took a bus to Beijing. I was very unlucky that my mp3 was stolen. I was very sad. I didn’t know why thieves went to steal other’s things. Why don’t they hunt for a job? I don’t why! I hope there is no thief in our motherland.

January 20 2005
When I got home, it was very dark. Why? There is no electric. Every year in Beijing, there is lack of electric to supply. Because there are a lot of factories. And it is very cold in winter. So the government decided: supply electric to resident and the factories must stop working. My house is in the manufacturing district. I was unlucky. It was very cold. So my father use the electric making machine to make electric. Oh! What a unlucky winter!

January 21 2005
It was cooler than yesterday. One of my father’s friends invited me to eat red bayberries. You must know it is unusual. Because we will climb the hill to eat red bayberries. There is no chance to eat red bayberries in the hill for the people who don’t live in Beijing. On the hill, you can breathe the fresh air, you can listen birds singing and you can eat red bayberries. It was enjoyable. It is said there are wild pigs in the hill. What a beautiful natural.

January 22 2005
Today I found time was a cruel thing. Whatever man is, time always goes on. It won’t stay to wait for somebody. You can’t use anything to exchange time. Time is also a fair thing. Although you have a lot of money or you enjoy high reputation, time won’t leave them more. Today I found I hadn’t enough time. Although I have 50-day holiday, but I found I had a lot of things to do. I had a lot of homework to do and I had something necessary to do.

January 23 2005
I have rested for 10 days. In these days, I felt very bored. I didn’t know to do what. Although I had a lot of things to do, I felt uncomfortable. I was ill because of the cold weather. I was tired, sleepy and had no strength. My parents are worried about my health. in fact, it didn’t matter. I was always in the room with air-conditioner and opened it in a low temperature. So when I went out, the high temperature disagreed to me. Finally, I was ill.

January 24 2005
Today, when I awaked up, I found the air-conditioner didn’t work. I used the control, but it still didn’t work. I knew the air-conditioner was in trouble. I went downstairs. My father told me two air-conditioner and two computer had been broken. Because my father used electric making machine to make electric, so the voltage was not stable. It led to the trouble. Oh! Whenever the government will let the factory use electric? If it lasts longer, I will be crazy!!
January 25 2005
It doesn’t matter that the air-conditioner has been broken. But my notebook-computer also was broken. I really don’t know what to do. So I went to play basketball. I didn’t know any one in that place. And I was the first time to go there to play basketball. At first, there was no person playing basketball. So I played basketball alone. A few minutes later, some students came to play. So we played together. Of course, we had a match. And It lasts two hours. After the match, I felt I would be dead. I was too tired.

January 25 2005
No computer, I will not know to do what. I have no solution to the problem. So I sent my notebook-computer to the Asus computer company. I must have my computer repaired. And the other one, it was thoroughly broken. It can’t be repaired again.The computer company told me that my notebook computer needed one week to repair. The electric led to all trouble. And many electrical appliances are broken. I don’t know when our country can solve the problem.

January 26 2005
I have lost two computers, but I had another one. I bought it about five years ago. It can be called curio. Though it was old. But it can still work. Although it works slowly, I was pleased. I can go on internet again. Chatting with my friends is a good relaxing. In the internet, one of my old friends invited me to tomorrow’s party. He told me that some friends would go, too. So I promised to go. A-ha! I can see my old friends. I was very happy and hopeful.

January 27 2005
It was sunny today. I was excited. I got up at a quarter to seven. I made a appointment to meet at nine o’clock. After I had my breakfast, I went to the city center of Beijing. It was cold outside. When I arrived, my friends didn’t arrive. I waited for him in front of the KFC’s door. I haven’t seen them for a year. And in a year, we didn’t come into contact with others frequently. About ten minutes left, my friends arrived one by one. After we greeted, we went to the 5-star restaurant to have lunch. The lunch cost us 800 yuan. Oh, dear! They were all very rich, and one was poor.

January 28 2005
Yesterday we played happily, but there were only ten people. I remembered last year there were twenty-two people at all. I heard some my friends had gone abroad. They went abroad to study. Maybe I couldn’t see them in the future. I think next year we won’t make a party. Next year is a very important year. We all will prepare for the college entrance examination. It is the most important for us now.
January 29 2005
I was bored. So I wanted to travel to Hong Kang. I told my father my decision. To my surprise, my father agreed. My father thought I always at home was bad. He thought I should go out to see our country clearly. How beautiful our country is! My father drove me a travel service. I filled out an application form. After that, the agency would finish every things. At last the agency told me it would take a week time to transact procedures.

January 30 2005
The screen of my father’s mobile telephone is broken. When you open the mobile telephone, the screen is always white with light. You can’t see from the screen. And my father is a businessman. He needed a new one. So my father and I went to the electrical appliance shop. There are many new kinds of mobile telephones. At first, my father chose a Sumsung one. But all the telephones have sold out. Finally, my father chose a Motorola one.

January 31 2005
The food in Shanghai disagree me. I think the food in Beijing is the most delicious. Seafood in Beijing is very fresh. Prawns in restaurant are all alive. And there are many food that you can’t see in other cities. It is very cheap that you eat seafood in Beijing. The less money you pay, the more enjoyable you are. Maybe my stomach is ill. Whatever food I eat, I am still thin. And I am too thin, I want to be a litter fatter. So I must eat more.

February 1 2005
My dog will be dead. She is very old. We have kept her for ten years. Now her hairs are falling. And she always lies on the ground. She can’t see very clearly. She eats a little. She becomes thin. She was very strong before. She is still guarding my family. She is one of my family member. Now we are all uneasy because she will die. I think you may know my thinking. Even if it is a dog, you can’t forget it. So these days, we feet her the best food.

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